You can view the feedback in this video below.
- Bruising: although there have been comments about it not looking realistic we feel that this will not detract from our point on conveying someone who has been domestically violence. But we are grateful for the comments so before filming tomorrow we will ensure the bruise looks as realistic as possible.
- Sound: A lack of sound was also questioned, something that we will deal with by recording Foley sounds and creating our overall soundtrack.
- Random Car Shot: The random car shot will also be next to another sequence, at the moment it doesn't make sense.
Very good work guys to get this feedback. Keep doing this at each key stage. Are you using twitter? Can you specify which social networking site you're using?
ReplyDeleteSorry - I hadn't played the film before asking about source - I see now it's facebook. Do any of you use twitter?
ReplyDeleteWe have a group twitter feed, @lmmjproductions and also had individual twitter accounts
ReplyDeleteAha yes! Stupid me - I hadn't scrolled up before writing! Brilliant stuff from the hospital and very convincing invalid impression Mark!
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