Wow. This is fab!! I need to take some time to look at all of your group's evaluations, but at first glance, they look terrific! Once again - you have all done so well! :) :))))
Qi - well done James - love the format of this text underlying the image - very clever and excellent Blog practice. you have also considered theoretical input throughout. The Gangster film - make more of how editing allows the plot to to with the fluctuating between two different time periods - audience get vital background info without having to see the whole of his life unfold - so ellipses really as well is demonstrated here. Barthes and enigma code, you could add about how it makes audiences more active or engaged - it forces them to ask questions. Your film - on second image - did not lighting and BL play an imp part in showing the contrast? Sound - the heart monitor is diegetic?
7 - can you apply any theory here to Narrative structure? Or at least explain how it breaks the traditional linear Todorov model On 5 have you not also desaturated colour to reflect mood? i may be wrong here.
Poster work is excellent
THE review - maybe give some examples of the language conventions that are used and then also demonstrate how you met these.- sorry you did this - wel done!
Q2 - excellent - there is a useful site about marketing films that you could look at and perhaps embed. Go to http://www.launchingfilms.tv/
Q3 - is excellent
Q4 Excellent - perhaps you could add the use of You Tube and film sites on the internet - made research so much easier, accessible, free and convenient. i would really emphasise how PS and ID allow you to Manipulate text and imagery. Imagine what it would be like if you had to use analogue means! The digital nature of al this allows you to manipulate.
Over all James - a quite breathe taking piece of work - you should feel proud of yourself.
Wow. This is fab!! I need to take some time to look at all of your group's evaluations, but at first glance, they look terrific! Once again - you have all done so well! :) :))))
ReplyDeleteQi - well done James - love the format of this text underlying the image - very clever and excellent Blog practice. you have also considered theoretical input throughout. The Gangster film - make more of how editing allows the plot to to with the fluctuating between two different time periods - audience get vital background info without having to see the whole of his life unfold - so ellipses really as well is demonstrated here. Barthes and enigma code, you could add about how it makes audiences more active or engaged - it forces them to ask questions.
ReplyDeleteYour film - on second image - did not lighting and BL play an imp part in showing the contrast?
Sound - the heart monitor is diegetic?
7 - can you apply any theory here to Narrative structure? Or at least explain how it breaks the traditional linear Todorov model
On 5 have you not also desaturated colour to reflect mood? i may be wrong here.
Poster work is excellent
THE review - maybe give some examples of the language conventions that are used and then also demonstrate how you met these.- sorry you did this - wel done!
Q2 - excellent - there is a useful site about marketing films that you could look at and perhaps embed. Go to http://www.launchingfilms.tv/
Q3 - is excellent
Q4 Excellent - perhaps you could add the use of You Tube and film sites on the internet - made research so much easier, accessible, free and convenient. i would really emphasise how PS and ID allow you to Manipulate text and imagery. Imagine what it would be like if you had to use analogue means! The digital nature of al this allows you to manipulate.
Over all James - a quite breathe taking piece of work - you should feel proud of yourself.